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Ok, so this is the very first time I've drawn something. I decided to start with Doki since she's my favorite out of the TSI series. 
PLZ Comment and Critique. I could really use it.
Enjoy!
PLZ Comment and Critique. I could really use it.
Enjoy!
Image size
3072x2304px 1.13 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
E7900
Shutter Speed
10/1979 second
Aperture
F/5.9
Focal Length
13 mm
ISO Speed
50
Date Taken
May 13, 2007, 5:18:04 PM
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Ah, your first sketch, huh? Finally, somebody came out of their shell!
For a first sketch, not bad at all! That's probably better than what I could a few weeks ago!
Since you want critique, you got it:
First, I'd like to point out the part just above the top lip of Doki. Considering that the line normally represents lips when her mouth is closed, that little triangle shouldn't be there. A little eraser would do the trick!
Second, would be the legs/foot. Considering her body size, the legs should be a little thicker. She's a healthy girl, not a freakishly diet-crazed skeleton!
Other than that, I have nothing else to say. Like I've said, I stink at critiquing artwork. With that said, I'd love to see more drawings from you someday!
For a first sketch, not bad at all! That's probably better than what I could a few weeks ago!
Since you want critique, you got it:
First, I'd like to point out the part just above the top lip of Doki. Considering that the line normally represents lips when her mouth is closed, that little triangle shouldn't be there. A little eraser would do the trick!
Second, would be the legs/foot. Considering her body size, the legs should be a little thicker. She's a healthy girl, not a freakishly diet-crazed skeleton!
Other than that, I have nothing else to say. Like I've said, I stink at critiquing artwork. With that said, I'd love to see more drawings from you someday!